Writer's Note

Before the final editing of my first novel, Infused, had been completed, a few friends read it and gave me some feedback. I learned that some things that I had left unsaid, needed to be said.

Since I wrote the story, I knew why people were doing the things that they were doing, and I understood how they felt. However, sometimes things aren't as apparent to people that do not have the story living in their head. So, I added a few lines in to the story to clarify what was meant.

I try to look for things that may not be evident when I write now, and then I will make sure that I state the non-so-obvious.

Two Novels in One

After A God's First World had been out a short time, I released a new printed book that includes both Infused and A God's First World. This is mainly for people that prefer printed books, but had not bought Infused previously. However, Infused is still available as a separate printed book.

This new combined book does use a smaller font to allow more words to fit onto a page. The print size is similar to what is commonly used in a standard paperback book. This allowed me to keep the page count down to 400 (from 530 pages with the larger print). This provides a less expensive alternative to buying the separate novels.

I'm seeing sales in new countries with the release of A God's First World. It seems that some people take you more seriously as a writer when you release your second novel; the new foreign sales have been for both novels.

I appreciate everyone that reads my stories. I hope that I bring some enjoyment, thought, and emotional involvement to you.

A God's First World is Published

After receiving the proof copy of the paperback edition of A God's First World, I found that I was happy with the cover and the formatting, so I released it for purchase on Amazon. I had also formatted e-book versions for Kindle and Nook, so I released those on the Amazon and Barnes and Noble web sites. I will be releasing the iBook version for Apple products soon.

It always feels good to have a nicely printed and bound copy of your novel in your hand. It presents you with a solid piece of evidence of your work that seeing the words on the screen just don't. Don't get me wrong, I am fine with reading books on an e-reader, but you want to be able to hold your baby in your hands.

Almost There

I have finished editing A God's First World, and I have formatted it for the print version, the Kindle version, and the Nook version. I am waiting for a proof to be shipped to me of the paperback version. Once I have that (assuming that it looks good), I will be making all of these different versions available for purchase. I still have to work on the iBook version for Apple's store, but that shouldn't take too long to do.

I pushed myself to go through this last pass of editing fairly quickly; I was able to work through three chapters on each of several evenings. Once I had finished the writing, I wanted to get the book into people's hands as soon as possible. With Infused, it sat around for about a year and a half after I had finished writing it before it was published. This was partially due to me slowly editing it myself, waiting on a friend to perform an in-depth grammatical edit, my lack of knowledge of how to publish a book, and being disillusioned by listening to other local authors talk about the business of selling books. This time, the book will be available about a month after I finished writing it.

I hope that people will enjoy this book. I have heard my best friend laugh, and I have heard her cry, as I have read the initial draft to her on the phone at night; it is a somewhat different type of store than Infused was. Whereas in Infused, Geoff reacted to the changes in his life without really changing himself (he was just freer to express who he was), he grows as a person in this story by actually experiencing life.

A God's First World has been written

I have finished writing A God's First World, the sequel to Infused. I still have editing and formatting for the different mediums to take care of, but, of course, completing the initial draft is a major milestone. It ended up being thirty-seven chapters long and right around 90,000 words.

I have done a fair amount of editing along the way, and I have a better grasp on what things should look like than I did while working on my first book, so hopefully I will be able to finish up the editing and have the book available soon.

Contemplating the Last Few Chapters

Over the last couple of weeks I have been contemplating the chapters leading up to the end of the book. I obviously know where the story has gotten to, and I also know how it will end. I'm just trying to figure out exactly what should be in between. I know the gist of what should be in there, but I'm just not sure of actually what should be said.

Sometimes, thinking through parts of of a book can take a while and what I should write will just come to me after letting my thoughts simmer. But, because I am close to being finished, I wanted to make good use of my simmering time. So, I made an editing pass through the thirty-four chapters that have been written while the simmering proceeded.

It had been quite a while since I had read the first chapters; I started writing this book about a year ago. In addition to fixing punctuation, correcting grammar, and smoothing out disjointed sentences, I was able to find a few inconsistencies, or forgotten facts, that were mentioned in one part of the book and then were not referenced in another part when they would be applicable. It's difficult to remember everything that you happened to mention in an chapter that you wrote close to a year ago.

I still have one mistake that I always make when I am writing, I just don't seem to be able to make myself incorporate the correction into my thought processes. An example of my problem is, 'The man that ate the frog was happy.' The correct sentence should be 'The man who ate the frog was happy.' I always use 'that' instead of 'who'. So, what I did during this editing pass was to perform a search for the word 'that' in every chapter and figure out if it should be 'who' instead. Often the corrections do not sound right to me, but I know that they (probably) are.

Just so you know, I will state that no one in my novel eats frogs (just in case you were wondering).

Getting Close

I've written a couple of more chapters since my last update and I've gone back and performed my initial edit on those chapters as well as all of the others that I had not done so on. The chapter that I made myself "slog" though was fairly long to begin with, but after I edited it, it turned out to be long enough to break into two chapters. There was also a subject change near the middle of the chapter that lent itself to being a good place to separate the text into the individual chapters.

I am getting very close to the end of the novel. Currently, I have completed thirty-four chapters and the word count is closing in on 82,000. It looks like this book will end up being about the same length as Infused. I've written part of the next chapter, and I know what the last chapter will say for the most part, so I just have to work out what goes between those two chapters. That shouldn't be too hard, right?